Help Wanted

Hey guys! I know I don't normally post on Wednesdays, buuuut I have something I would like to share with you!
If you read Tuesday's post, then you know that I rewrote the entire first chapter of my first book and it was totally unexpected. Well, since I'm taking a break from querying in order to "perfect" Unperfected (why yes, that pun was indeed intended) I wanted to share my progress here on the blog.
So today, I want to give you the chance to read chapter one! This chapter is new again, and needs feedback. You can click here to read the chapter, and if you want to comment, I would love it. Tell me what you liked, didn't like, what needs changing, etc. You can comment down below, on Wattpad, message me on Twitter or Pinterest, or even shoot me an e-mail. Whatever works for you!
Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to give me feedback. You're awesome :)